Audience feedback.

After explaining our concept to an audience we found they like to see why the character becomes a criminal. It makes the audience see the error of his ways and because the plot is from the killers point of view is makes them sympathetic towards him so there is emotional engagement, furthermore the audience are more attracted to the story. It creates suspense whilst creating enigmas: will he kill others too? There were areas which the audience disliked. For example, they found there was no reality to the plot and there was no effect from the outside world. It was controversial that it didn’t incorporate the rest of the world and that it didn’t “fit it.” To solve this, we will include more external factors in to the plot such as perhaps another character coming to save the victim or generally more characters involved.